Hi. Shadow here. I have a preview of a story I've made up. I everyone likes it, I'll start posting the story. For now, here's a preview: P.S. It's kinda long, and I'm not too good with disceribing things.Sorry. Also a lot of the characters I made up so if you don't know something or are curious about something just ask!! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(suddenly X dashes to the right,just missing a blast from Serium.)
Serium: As fast as you are,X you cannot evade my attacks for long!
X:(*Breaths heavily* He's right. I can't keep this up for much longer.)
Serium:Hahahahahahaha! Die! X!
X:Hey,Serium! Eat this! X-Slash!
(X fires two slash waves with his U.Sword making a X shockwave at Serium)
Serium:heheheheh,Perfect! Serium Counterwave!
(Serium absorbs X's attack into his buster and counters with the same attack with his energy added to it.)
X:What the-
(X rolls and just dodges the attack)
X:W-What was that?!
Serium:Heheheheh. Like that? That is my Serium Counterwave. Any attack you throw at me I can asorb and use it on you. In short your own attacks will be you downfall. Hehehehahahaha!
X:Yeah? Prove it! AAAaahhhhh! Shroiken Punch!
Serium: Hahahahahahaha! Serium Counterwave!
(As X throws the Shroiken Punch, Serium asborbs the attack, charges and sends the attack back at X.)
X:No way! that's not possible!
(X guards aganist the attack,but is still sent flying into the wall. Debris flies everywhere.)
X:uunnhh! I'm not through yet!
Serium:hmm. Well I am! You no longer pose a threat to me. To let you suffer a little longer, I shall let you live. For now.heheheheheh. The next time we meet I shall not be so kind. Know this,X. The time of holding us back is over! We shall rule this world! hehehehehehahahhahaha!
(Serium warps out.)
X:....Not if I can help it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Alia:X are you o.k.?
X: Yeah. not great,but I''m o.k.
Alia:Power down,and I'll start working on your armor.
X:Thanks. X Armor! Power Down!
(A blue light shines around X as he becomes Josh Light.)
Josh:Well,I'm going into the city. Need anything?
Alia:No,but you might ask around.
Josh:Yeah and come back with a truck load of junk?
Alia:heheheh. Good point. Don't worry. Us girls are going out later.
Josh:Well I might bring back some stuff. See ya!
Alia:See ya.
(Door opens and closes)
Bass:Just getting back?
Josh:Huh? oh..yeah.
Bass:Serium giving you trouble?
Josh:.....
Bass:I'll take that as a yes.
Josh:How could a Maverick get that strong?
Bass:Because he's not a Maverick.
Josh:Huh?
Bass:He's working for somebody else. That much we've gathered. So you can't lump them in with the Mavericks.
Josh:.....Yeah. What do we call them?
Bass:We'll figure out a name after we've learned who their boss is.
Josh:Can't wait to go up aganist him.
Bass:....Is Zero taking is shift?
Josh:Should be. Well,I'm heading out.
Bass:......X,no matter how strong he seems,your armor is superior. Remember who built it.
Gen.Dextron:Yes,Cmd. When you've been around as long as I have,you learn that if the X-Team is having trouble. You'll have trouble.
Cmd.Jet Blade:But,their-
Gen.Dextron:Despite what you've heard,they have saved us from some..problems,that could have troubled us.
Cmd.Jet Blade:Yes sir.
Gen.Dextron:Move to code yellow,and have everyone on alert.
Cmd.Jet Blade:Right away,sir!
Gen.Dextron:(I have a very bad feeling about this)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Serium:Hahahahahaha!
????:Enjoying yourself?
Serium: I can't help it. X is nothing to me. The great Maverick Hunter...Ha! He is nothing but a joke to me now! My power is so strong...I could destory him without blinking!
????:......heheheheheheh.
Serium:Funny, is it not?
????:I was not laughing at you pitiful joke.
Serium:What?
????:(Stands) Do you think that it will that easy to defeat a Maverick Hunter who has stopped Sigma, Atomic, Delta Maximus, and me!!?? (Slams Serium into a wall) Not to mention countless other foes I rather not think about. (Grabs Serium and hold him to eye length) Do not think it will be that easy.
Serium:Ye-Yes sir. (???? releases Serium) But..I can defeat him!
????: For now,yes. but he will soon adapt. (Sits back on his throne) but we will not give him the time to adapt...(turns to Serium)..Will we?
Seruim: N-No, Master, We will not.
????:Good. Now go, draw him out and crush him and his excuse for a team.
R.Dr.:Very good. We have just received funding to get started.
Dr.: Great. So how long do you think it will take to be ready?
R.Dr.:Not too long. A couple of months. No greater than a year.
Dr.: Sounds good. Have any canidaties in mind?
R.Dr.: A few. It is a little too early to tell for sure.
Dr.: I understand. Well, I must be going.
R.Dr.:We'll notify you when to begin.
Dr.: Very good. Until then. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(Serium warps down)
Serium:......Now, to begin.
(Serium throws a charged blast into a nearby building causing a huge explosion)
Serium:heheheheheheheh.
(X warps down)
X:Serium! Serium:Ahh..X. Where have you been?
X:Stop,Serium! Now!
Serium:And if I don't?(Charges) Are you fast enough to stop this attack and fight me?(Serium throws another blast at a building)
X: No, but I have help.
(Zero warps down in front of the blast and stops it with his Z-Saber.)
Zero:That all you got,Serium?
Serium: No..I have much more! Get ready!
X:Here he comes!
Serium:Serium Cannons!
X:X-Buster!
(X's buster just holds off Serium's attack, while Zero dashes to stop the other blast from hitting another building)
Serium:Eheheheheh. Try to stop this!
(Serium charges and fires two beams from his S-Busters in different directions)
X:Let's go, Zero!
Zero: No problem!
(X and Zero dash off and fire attacks to block Serium's blasts from hurting anyone)
Zero: X! This isn't working! We're too close to everyone!
X: Yeah! We've got to take this battle outside the city before someone gets hurt!
Serium:(...*smile*...good. Everything is going as planned.)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Tron: How's it going, Alia?
Alia:(Franticily typing) Not that good. I just can't get a good anylisis of Serium.
Tron: Maybe he has some kind of barrier?
Alia: It seems that way, but I can't pick up any energy readings of that kind!
Nana: There on the move! Heading outside the city!
Alia: Keep me posted, Nana!
Nana: Roger!
Alia: Tron, you might need to get the team ready!
Tron: On it!
Alia:....What are you hiding, Serium... ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Cmd.Jet Blade: Gen.Dextron! General!
Gen.Dextron: Jet Blade? What is it?
Cmd.Jet Blade: It..It's the X-Team! They're in section 5 moving outside the city!
General! They're in battle with Serium!!
Gen.Dextron: What!! Code Red! Get the Beta and Delta Units out there now!
(Suddenly two blades strike each other causing sparks to fly)
X: X-buster!
Serium: S-Counterwave!
X:Zero! Heads up!
Zero: No problem! Z-Saber!
(Zero deflects the blast with his Z-Saber and dashes for Serium)
Zero:We're going to end this, Serium!
Serium:Hahahahaha! I don't thnik so, Zero... Come my friends! It is time to destory this city!
(Suddenly thousands of replioids warp down behind Serium)
X:What the-
Zero:No way! How are you able to warp this many Mavericks this close to the city!? Only us and the Federation can do that!!
Serium:heheheheheh. I don't answer to you, Zero! However, I will tell you one thing. These replioids are not Mavericks!
X:What? What do you mean?!
Serium:heheheh. These are modified replioids! There intelegence, speed, and strength have all been modified, thanks to theselittle friends! heheheheheh!
(Serium holds out his hand and a small light shines around)
X:What's that!?
Zero:This can't be good!
Serium:These are known as Cyber-Elfs, and they will be your destruction! Enough! It is time! Omniloids! Destory everything that's in your path!
(The Omniloids start rushing X, Zero, and the City.)
X:(Charges X-Buster)...You ready, Zero?
Zero:(Readys Z-Buster, Z-Saber, and nods) Let's show these guys why you don't mess with us!
X:Let's take them out!!!
(X and Zero dash into the heart of the Omniloids while Serium laughs at his soon to be victory.........)
I've done this type of stories before on Fanfiction.net, didn't fly all that well for me.
Here's my pointers, add some good humour. You don't have to give up on the seriousness of the story, it's just that a dash of humour goes a long way.
Since this is in the sprite comics section, I gotta say the more Original Characters, the more annoying task of making you're own sprites. I wish you luck. (salute)
Hahahaha!! Don't worry I'm already on that, and I have a lot of humor in store!! Like when Marino and Roll take Axl and spy on X and Tron!!!!!! Anyway, I aready have about 6 ch. finished and all. Also, Thanks for the support guys!!! Ch.1 will be up soon and it'll probably be a lot longer. (Sorry) anyhoo, I might be able to put up some character pics really soon!!(In the Art thread, of course) We'll see. -- Edited by Shadow at 18:49, 2007-07-25
Hi, everyone! Sorry about double post. Here's Ch.1, sorta. I'll have to split it between between two post. but anyway here it is!!!______________________________________________________________
(Last time......)
Delta Maximus: This world is mine...I have won.
X:Not yet, you haven't!
Delta Maximus: I'm am in Perfect Form! You cannot defeat me, X. It is useless. My energy output far execceds yours. It is how the Dr. predicited. The only flaw...is you Zero.
Zero:.....
Delta Maximus: Why do you not follow your orders? You know your mission. Zero, the Dr. called you his perfect creation. You were to help him rule this world! Why do you fight aganist this?
Zero: Because....It's not right! He wanted to destroy everything! And I will not allow that to happen, Maximus! (Unsheaths Z-Saber)
This ends here!
Delta Maximus: Very well. If you will not carry out his orders..(Charges)..I will!! Prepare yourselves! This is your final battle!
Supreme Commander: I don't like Den Tech City's weaken state.
Admiral: Yes, of course. I agree, but we are doing everything we can!
Supreme Commander: Perhaps, but I do not have first hand knowledge this. Therefore, I am sending one of my most trusted men to oversee the rebuilding plans. He will be in charge over anything he wishes.
Admiral: As you wish.
Supreme Commander: Send word to those in charge of Den Tech.
Admiral: Very good, sir. But may I ask....Who will you be sending?
Hawk:....Nothing to do....I hate these breaks...no spying, no fighting, and especially....NO MONEY!!! Stupid, X-Team!! I can't get any work because of them!! AAaarrgghhh!!!
????: Would you like some work?
Hawk:(Pulls out his guns) Who's there!?
????: Now, now....no worrys. I just wanted to know if you needed a job.
Hawk:...Well, I'm kinda busy at the moment! And besides, I don't take jobs from black robed freaks either! I blow them out my window!! (Hawk shoots a volly of plasma shots at the mysterious figure)
????: (The attacks did nothing) Now, is that necessary?
Hawk: What the- What do you want?!
????: Here. ( The mysterious figure drops a bag)
Hawk: What's this?..... Money!?!?
????: Ten-thousand zenny.
Hawk: O.k. you have my attention.
????: Good. I'm glad we've come to an agreement...
Zero: Why would we make this stuff up? I don't know what's going on but, that guy slamed me into the ground like I was a feather. And I know he wasn't at full power.
Aila: This doesn't look good.
Nana: I just got through running a energy sweep of sector 9. Whoever you met isn't there anymore. What's weird though is there isn't any energy traces. It's like they wasn't even there!
Axl: What kind of power do they have!?
Alia: X? You've been really quiet.
X: Huh? Oh, It's nothing. Just a lot of stuff on my mind.(Leaves)
???: Heheheheheh. Now, how does one get X, and Zero's attention?? Oh! I know! (Charges) Resounding Crusher!!
( A blast of energy impacts a nearby building and implodes the building)
???: Heheheheheh. I wonder how long it takes them to get here...? Oh well. I'll just destroy some more buildings until they do! Heheheheheheh!!! (Charges weapons)
LOL!!! Beefy??? Never heard Mega Man as beefy!!! Hahaha!! But thanks for the comment. I'm wondering wether I want this avatar or another one I'm going to put up. Anywhoo, I really have 7 Ch. already made up. all of them are about twice this long. Haha!! But, I'm wondering if I should just stop and open a link to my Xanga site instead, or keep writing. *Shrughs*
Thanks!!! Um, I'll try to get my pics up soon. Maybe in a couple of days, but they probably won't be in color since it takes froever for me to color them. We'll see. ^_^ The second part of the 1 Ch. will be up soon, too!!!! And thanks for the support guys!!!!!
???: Hmmmm...Where are they?? I'm growing impatient!! Huh?
(Down below)
X: I think he's up on that building!!
Zero: Yeah, he's up there. I can see his energy aura!
X: Let's go!
(X and Zero start to run up the building)
???: Well, well.( He jumps off the building toward X and Zero)
X: There he is!!
???: What took so long!? (Fires a energy shot)
X: (Dodges) Who are you!?
???: Hahahahahaha!!! ( Fires a volly of energy shots)
Zero: Don't waste your breath on these guys. They only understand one thing-( ready his Z-Saber)-THIS!!
( As Zero Throws a slash wave, X fires a buster shot that counters the energy shots.)
X:Zero! Now!!!
Zero: AAAAaaaaaaaa!!!!!!
( Zero and X slam into the unknown replioid in a huge explosion)
???: (Jumps back and charges) You will both fall before the power of, Merix!! Resounding Crusher!!
( As the smoke clears X and Zero dash toward Merix. Zero charges his Z-Saber and X unsheaths his U. Sword.)
Merix: Huh?! What the-
Zero: So you wanna fight,huh?
X: Well, we'll give you a fight!! X-Slash!!
Zero: Z-Slash!!
Merix: No! How-!?
( X and Zero slash Merix higher up in the air)
X: I don't know who you are- (Dissapears and reapears above Merix with his X-Buster charged and ready)-But you are gonna regret attacking us!!
Zero:Containment beam! See ya, buddy!
Merix: No! I won't-
X: X-Buster! Full Power!!( Fires X-Buster) HAAaaaaaaa!!!!
( Merix is sent down by X's attack, Zero flies up just outside of the attack and slashes Merix back up where X attack with his U.Sword. Merix slams into the top of a nearby building)
X: I think that took care of him!
Zero: Heh. Stupid, Maverick didn't see what hit him!