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A Mega Man X Story


Hi. Shadow here. I have a preview of a story I've made up. I everyone likes it, I'll start posting the story. For now, here's a preview:
P.S. It's kinda long, and I'm not too good with disceribing things.Sorry.cry Also a lot of the characters I made up so if you don't know something or are curious about something just ask!!
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(suddenly X dashes to the right,just missing a blast from Serium.)

Serium: As fast as you are,X you cannot evade my attacks for long!

X:(*Breaths heavily* He's right. I can't keep this up for much longer.)

Serium:Hahahahahahaha! Die! X!

X:Hey,Serium! Eat this! X-Slash!

(X fires two slash waves with his U.Sword making a X shockwave at Serium)

Serium:heheheheh,Perfect! Serium Counterwave!

(Serium absorbs X's attack into his buster and counters with the same attack with his energy added to it.)

X:What the-

(X rolls and just dodges the attack)

X:W-What was that?!

Serium:Heheheheh. Like that? That is my Serium Counterwave. Any attack you throw at me I can asorb and use it on you. In short your own attacks will be you downfall. Hehehehahahaha!

X:Yeah? Prove it! AAAaahhhhh! Shroiken Punch!

Serium: Hahahahahahaha! Serium Counterwave!

(As X throws the Shroiken Punch, Serium asborbs the attack, charges and sends the attack back at X.)

X:No way! that's not possible!
 
(X guards aganist the attack,but is still sent flying into the wall. Debris flies everywhere.)

X:uunnhh! I'm not through yet!

Serium:hmm. Well I am! You no longer pose a threat to me. To let you suffer a little longer, I shall let you live. For now.heheheheheh. The next time we meet I shall not be so kind. Know this,X. The time of holding us back is over! We shall rule this world! hehehehehehahahhahaha!

(Serium warps out.)

X:....Not if I can help it.
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Alia:X are you o.k.?

X: Yeah. not great,but I''m o.k.

Alia:Power down,and I'll start working on your armor.

X:Thanks. X Armor! Power Down!

(A blue light shines around X as he becomes Josh Light.)

Josh:Well,I'm going into the city. Need anything?

Alia:No,but you might ask around.

Josh:Yeah and come back with a truck load of junk?

Alia:heheheh. Good point. Don't worry. Us girls are going out later.

Josh:Well I might bring back some stuff. See ya!

Alia:See ya.

(Door opens and closes)

Bass:Just getting back?

Josh:Huh? oh..yeah.

Bass:Serium giving you trouble?

Josh:.....

Bass:I'll take that as a yes.

Josh:How could a Maverick get that strong?

Bass:Because he's not a Maverick.

Josh:Huh?

Bass:He's working for somebody else. That much we've gathered. So you can't lump them in with the Mavericks.

Josh:.....Yeah. What do we call them?

Bass:We'll figure out a name after we've learned who their boss is.

Josh:Can't wait to go up aganist him.

Bass:....Is Zero taking is shift?

Josh:Should be. Well,I'm heading out.

Bass:......X,no matter how strong he seems,your armor is superior. Remember who built it.

(Bass enters the Command Room)

Josh:.........
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(footsteps)(Door opens)

Lt:Sir. Here is your report.

Cmd.Jet Blade:Thank you,Lt. You are dismissed.

Lt:Yes,sir.

Cmd.Jet Blade:Here's what we have so far.Gen..

Gen.Dextron:Hmmm. Not good.

Cmd.Jet Blade:No sir. It's not.

Gen.Dextron:This is confirmed data?

Cmd.Jet Blade:Yes sir.

Gen.Dextron:Move to yellow alert.

Cmd.Jet Blade:Are you sure sir?

Gen.Dextron:Yes,Cmd. When you've been around as long as I have,you learn that if the X-Team is having trouble. You'll have trouble.

Cmd.Jet Blade:But,their-

Gen.Dextron:Despite what you've heard,they have saved us from some..problems,that could have troubled us.

Cmd.Jet Blade:Yes sir.

Gen.Dextron:Move to code yellow,and have everyone on alert.

Cmd.Jet Blade:Right away,sir!

Gen.Dextron:(I have a very bad feeling about this)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Serium:Hahahahahaha!

????:Enjoying yourself?

Serium: I can't help it. X is nothing to me. The great Maverick Hunter...Ha! He is nothing but a joke to me now! My power is so strong...I could destory him without blinking!

????:......heheheheheheh.

Serium:Funny, is it not?

????:I was not laughing at you pitiful joke.

Serium:What?

????:(Stands) Do you think that it will that easy to defeat a Maverick Hunter who has stopped Sigma, Atomic, Delta Maximus, and me!!?? (Slams Serium into a wall) Not to mention countless other foes I rather not think about. (Grabs Serium and hold him to eye length) Do not think it will be that easy.

Serium:Ye-Yes sir. (???? releases Serium) But..I can defeat him!

????: For now,yes. but he will soon adapt. (Sits back on his throne) but we will not give him the time to adapt...(turns to Serium)..Will we?

Seruim: N-No, Master, We will not.

????:Good. Now go, draw him out and crush him and his excuse for a team.

Seruim:Yes, sir.
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Dr.:So how is the work proceeding?

R.Dr.:Very good. We have just received funding to get started.

Dr.: Great. So how long do you think it will take to be ready?

R.Dr.:Not too long. A couple of months. No greater than a year.

Dr.: Sounds good. Have any canidaties in mind?

R.Dr.: A few. It is a little too early to tell for sure.

Dr.: I understand. Well, I must be going.

R.Dr.:We'll notify you when to begin.

Dr.: Very good. Until then.
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(Serium warps down)

Serium:......Now, to begin.

(Serium throws a charged blast into a nearby building causing a huge explosion)

Serium:heheheheheheheh.

(X warps down)

X:Serium! Serium:Ahh..X. Where have you been?

X:Stop,Serium! Now!

Serium:And if I don't?(Charges) Are you fast enough to stop this attack and fight me?(Serium throws another blast at a building)

X: No, but I have help.

(Zero warps down in front of the blast and stops it with his Z-Saber.)

Zero:That all you got,Serium?

Serium: No..I have much more! Get ready!

X:Here he comes!

Serium:Serium Cannons!

X:X-Buster!

(X's buster just holds off Serium's attack, while Zero dashes to stop the other blast from hitting another building)

Serium:Eheheheheh. Try to stop this!

(Serium charges and fires two beams from his S-Busters in different directions)

X:Let's go, Zero!

Zero: No problem!

(X and Zero dash off and fire attacks to block Serium's blasts from hurting anyone)

Zero: X! This isn't working! We're too close to everyone!

X: Yeah! We've got to take this battle outside the city before someone gets hurt!

Serium:(...*smile*...good. Everything is going as planned.)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Tron: How's it going, Alia?

Alia:(Franticily typing) Not that good. I just can't get a good anylisis of Serium.

Tron: Maybe he has some kind of barrier?

Alia: It seems that way, but I can't pick up any energy readings of that kind!

Nana: There on the move! Heading outside the city!

Alia: Keep me posted, Nana!

Nana: Roger!

Alia: Tron, you might need to get the team ready!

Tron: On it!

Alia:....What are you hiding, Serium...
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Cmd.Jet Blade: Gen.Dextron! General!

Gen.Dextron: Jet Blade? What is it?

Cmd.Jet Blade: It..It's the X-Team! They're in section 5 moving outside the city!

General! They're in battle with Serium!!

Gen.Dextron: What!! Code Red! Get the Beta and Delta Units out there now!

 Jet Blade! You're with me!

Cmd.Jet Blade: Yes, sir!

Gen.Dextron:Let's move out!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

(Suddenly two blades strike each other causing sparks to fly)

X: X-buster!

Serium: S-Counterwave!

X:Zero! Heads up!

Zero: No problem! Z-Saber!

(Zero deflects the blast with his Z-Saber and dashes for Serium)

Zero:We're going to end this, Serium!

Serium:Hahahahaha! I don't thnik so, Zero... Come my friends! It is time to destory this city!

(Suddenly thousands of replioids warp down behind Serium)

X:What the-

Zero:No way! How are you able to warp this many Mavericks this close to the city!? Only us and the Federation can do that!!

Serium:heheheheheh. I don't answer to you, Zero! However, I will tell you one thing. These replioids are not Mavericks!

X:What? What do you mean?!

Serium:heheheh. These are modified replioids! There intelegence, speed, and strength have all been modified, thanks to theselittle friends! heheheheheh!

(Serium holds out his hand and a small light shines around)

X:What's that!?

Zero:This can't be good!

Serium:These are known as Cyber-Elfs, and they will be your destruction! Enough! It is time! Omniloids! Destory everything that's in your path!

(The Omniloids start rushing X, Zero, and the City.)

X:(Charges X-Buster)...You ready, Zero?

Zero:(Readys Z-Buster, Z-Saber, and nods) Let's show these guys why you don't mess with us!

X:Let's take them out!!!

(X and Zero dash into the heart of the Omniloids while Serium laughs at his soon to be victory.........)


-- Edited by Shadow at 11:42, 2007-07-07

-- Edited by Shadow at 11:47, 2007-07-07

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Wow, you weren't kidding about the longness. jawdrop.gif

I've done this type of stories before on Fanfiction.net, didn't fly all that well for me.

Here's my pointers, add some good humour. You don't have to give up on the seriousness of the story, it's just that a dash of humour goes a long way.

Since this is in the sprite comics section, I gotta say the more Original Characters, the more annoying task of making you're own sprites. I wish you luck. (salute)

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Good Job Shadow!smile

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Hahahaha!! Don't worry I'm already on that, and I have a lot of humor in store!! Like when Marino and Roll take Axl and spy on X and Tron!!!!!! Anyway, I aready have about 6 ch. finished and all. Also, Thanks for the support guys!!! Ch.1 will be up soon and it'll probably be a lot longer. (Sorry) anyhoo, I might  be able to put up some character pics really soon!!(In the Art thread, of course)  We'll see. -- Edited by Shadow at 18:49, 2007-07-25

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Hi, everyone! Sorry about double post. Here's Ch.1, sorta. I'll have to split it between between two post. furious but anyway here it is!!!______________________________________________________________

(Last time......)

Delta Maximus: This world is mine...I have won.

X:Not yet, you haven't!

Delta Maximus: I'm am in Perfect Form! You cannot defeat me, X. It is useless. My energy output far execceds yours. It is how the Dr. predicited. The only flaw...is you Zero.

Zero:.....

Delta Maximus: Why do you not follow your orders? You know your mission. Zero, the Dr. called you his perfect creation. You were to help him rule this world! Why do you fight aganist this?

Zero: Because....It's not right! He wanted to destroy everything! And I will not allow that to happen, Maximus! (Unsheaths Z-Saber)

This ends here!

Delta Maximus: Very well. If you will not carry out his orders..(Charges)..I will!! Prepare yourselves! This is your final battle!

Zero: No, Delta Maximus...It's yours!

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(Sparks fly)

Delta Maximus:N-No! I-I-I-It's Imposible! Z-Zero! T-The Dr. was t-to.... ZZzzzttthhhhh! N-NOOO!

X:It's over Maximus! This is it!

Delta Maximus: N-NOO! I-It's not! I-I shall use the Dark Virus!! I-I will c-complete my m-mission!!

Zero: NO! Maximus! Don't! In your state...

(Delta Maxumis starts charging the Dark Virus to put into overdrive)

(Comp): WARNING! WARNING! DARK VIRUS REACHING OVERDRIVE LIMIT! WARNING!

Delta Maximus: Now I shall- What..What is happening!?!? I-I feel...

X: What the-

Zero: X! Fire a blast at him! It might stop him!

X:Right! X-Buster Full Power! HHAAAaaaa!!!!!

(A huge explosion eurpts only to be swallowed by a black energy)

Zero:What-

????:AARRRRAARRARRRGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!! (Delta Maximus transforms into a Dark Beast)

X:The Dark Virus! It's....!

Zero:We Have to stop this, X!

X:Right! Let's go!

(X and Zero rush the Dark Beast)

Zero: Z-Saber!

X: X-Buster!

Dark Beast:NOO USEEEE!!!

(The Darkness starts to envlope everything)

X: HHAAAHHHH!!! NO-

Zero:Z-Wav-

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Bass: Hurry! We have to help X, and Zero!

Axl:Um.. Bass!

Bass:What!?

Axl:What that?!

(Bass turns to see the Darkness rushing toward them)

ZX:That can't be good

Roll: Um..Maybe we should..

ZX:RUN!!!!!

Axl:That's one way of putting it!

Bass:It's no use. we can't-

Axl:Bass-

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....................(Suddenly a burst of light shines through the Darkness)

Dark Beast:NNOOOOO!!!! LIGHT!!!! HHOWWW!!????

X:AAARRRRGGHHHHH!!!!! X-BUSTER!!!!!!!!!!!

(X fires a huge blast of light that destorys the Darkness and returns Delta Maximus back to his normal state.)

Zero:What the- What happend?

Bass:Hmmm? What just happend?

Axl:Where's that dark thing?

ZX:You mean "what" was that dark thing?

Axl:Whatever.

Bass:Where is,X?

Roll: Here! He's Here!

(Everyone rushes to Roll)

ZX:Is he o.k.?

Roll: I think so.

(Grounds rumble)

Zero:This place is falling apart. Let's go!

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(5 months later. With the destruction of Delta Maximus, rebuilding is beginning and the X-Team is slowing recovering from what happened.)

X: Man, she's driving me nuts!!!

Alia: Is it-

Tron: Josh?Josh!

X:Quick! Hide me!!

Alia: Sorry, X. I can't.

X:(Glares) You're enjoying this, aren't you?

Tron:There you are! Josh, you still need to rest!

X: Look, Tron, I'm fine. Don't-

Tron: Let's go!

(Pulls X along)

X:Tron! Hey! Come on.....

Alia: You have no idea!! *laughs*

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Bass: Something wrong, Zero?

Zero:....Just thinking about what Delta Maximus said.

Bass:You think he was right?

Zero: No, but....this armor.....I *was*to help Dr. Willy win.

Bass: That is not so now, Zero. I was to help him as well, but that is not so now.

Zero:Yeah, but ....

Bass: Don't worry about it. You are not Maximus.

Zero:...........(Am I?)

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X:........

Zero: What's up?

X:Huh?...nothing....Just thinking.

Zero:...About what?

X: Zero, how did I stop Delta Maximus...? What was that..energy?

Zero: Beats me. Just glad it happened when it did. Being absorbed by the Dark Virus is not my idea of fun.

X: I guess..

Zero: I wouldn't worry about it, X. Your armor is different and not a lot is known about it, so it might just be something that normally happens.

X: Yeah, like yours?

Zero:(laughs) yeah!(......my armor....)

(Com)Alia: X! Zero! We have a new mission!

X: Well, let's get to it!

Zero: About time we started to clean and rebuild this city!

(Com)Alia: We have a lot of work ahead of us! The entire world needs help!

X: Right! Time to go! X-Team! Move out!!

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(Present Time)

..........What is strength......?

..is it being able to destory anything in your path....?

..the abilty withstand any attack.....?

...is it......

(the song "Don't wanna be" by Spinwake plays)

(As the song plays many characters are shown and some battle scenes from the past and future)

(The title of Mega Man X:The X-Team:Final Battle appears.)

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????:Heheheheheheheh.....It is time....I have been away for too long..........Get ready.....Here I come...heheheheheheh......

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X:*sighs* Man rebuilding is tough work!

Axl: No pain-

Bass:(throws a huge bolder at Axl that buries him)....no gain.

Axl:(Gets out from under the boulder) WHAT WAS THAT FOR!!!!??

Bass: Just testing how strong you are.

Axl:*fumes* Yeah right!

Zero:Stop messing around, Axl. We've got work to do.

Bass:(Leaving) Indeed.

Axl:Hey, wait a second! He threw the boulder at ME!!!

ZX: Come on! Let's just-

(Bass and Axl knock ZX upside the head)

ZX:Ouch!! what'd I do!?

Bass: Something. I'm sure.

ZX:Hey-

X:o.k. everyone, we're finished here. Let's move on to sector 7.

Everyone:Right!

ZX:..........*grumbles*

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Alia:(Typing)....o.k. sector 6, clear. Now on to sector 7.

Nana: Alia...Alia! Maybe you should take a break. You've been working non stop for nearly the entire week!!

Alia: No, I'm fine! Just need to get started on Sector 7.

Nana: Alia! Take a break! I'll cover for you!

Alia:......O.k...Maybe I should take a break... Thanks,Nana!

Nana: No problem!

*Beep**Beep* *Beep**Beep*

Alia: Scrach that! Looks like somethings up!

Nana: Yeah! It's in Sector 9!

Alia: X! Zero! Come in!

(Com)X: What's up, Alia?

Alia: We've got some strange readings in Sector 9!

(Com)Zero: Sector 9? That place hasn't even been cleared of Maverick mechaloids!

(Com)X: Zero and I will check it out!

Alia: Be carefull! I can't pinpoint the location, or tell you what it is!

(Com)Zero: No problem! Let's go!

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Supreme Commander: I don't like Den Tech City's weaken state.

Admiral: Yes, of course. I agree, but we are doing everything we can!

Supreme Commander: Perhaps, but I do not have first hand knowledge this. Therefore, I am sending one of my most trusted men to oversee the rebuilding plans. He will be in charge over anything he wishes.

Admiral: As you wish.

Supreme Commander: Send word to those in charge of Den Tech.

Admiral: Very good, sir. But may I ask....Who will you be sending?

Supreme Commander: I shall send, General Dextron.

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Hawk:....Nothing to do....I hate these breaks...no spying, no fighting, and especially....NO MONEY!!! Stupid, X-Team!! I can't get any work because of them!! AAaarrgghhh!!!

????: Would you like some work?

Hawk:(Pulls out his guns) Who's there!?

????: Now, now....no worrys. I just wanted to know if you needed a job.

Hawk:...Well, I'm kinda busy at the moment! And besides, I don't take jobs from black robed freaks either! I blow them out my window!! (Hawk shoots a volly of plasma shots at the mysterious figure)

????: (The attacks did nothing) Now, is that necessary?

Hawk: What the- What do you want?!

????: Here. ( The mysterious figure drops a bag)

Hawk: What's this?..... Money!?!?

????: Ten-thousand zenny.

Hawk: O.k. you have my attention.

????: Good. I'm glad we've come to an agreement...

Hawk: So...What's the job?....

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X: I don't see anything yet! You?

Zero: Nothing. I don't like it. We should be running into something by now, but I haven't seen even a half-working mechaloid, yet!

X: Let's check over there. Those buildings might be hiding something.

Zero: I hope this isn't one of Alia's wild goose chases!

(Com)Alia: I heard that, Zero!

X: Alia, is the energy reading still there?

(Com)Alia: Yes. but it's strange..Even with you there..I still can't get any readings! I think that....this....kind...blockin...(Static)

X:Aila? Alia! Come in!......Looks like whatever's here can distort our communications.

Zero: I got a bad feeling about this.

X: Yeah...Hey! I'm picking up an energy becon! Over there!

Zero: Right! Let's find out what's going on!

(X and Zero dash towards the becon)

X: I don't see anything.

Zero: Me either...Wait! Over there.

(X walks toward a device that was emitting the energy wave)

X:( Holds up the device) What's going on? Is this someone's idea of a joke?

Zero: Well, I don't find this amuseing.

????: It was not meant as a joke.

?????: It was meant to be bait.

???: And they took it. Are you sure these are the ones?

????: Yes. It is them.

X: Who are you!?

Zero: And what do you want!?

????: Just to meet you. The Legendary Maverick Hunters. X...Zero.

?????: Before we destory you, that is.

Zero: A bunch of wise guys, huh?

???: heheh. (Charges energy) You'll regret that remark.

Zero: Yeah? Prove it! (Unsheashs Z-Saber)

?????: We're waiting, O, great Maverick hunter!!

( Zero slashes at one of them with his Z-Saber)

Zero: Huh!? What the-

( The cloked figure easily side-stepped Zero's attack and counterattacked with a punch to the gut that sent Zero reeling)

Zero:*Gasp* W-What the- How did y-you...!?!?

X:Zero!!

Zero: I-I'm fine. These guy are stronger then they look.

???: Oh, you haven't seen nothing yet!!

????: Heheh. That is enough, for now.

?????: Hahahaha!

(They turn to leave)

X: Hold it! (Charges X-Buster)

???: Please. That sorry excuse for an attack. Stop us?

????: I said, enough! It's time to go.

(Two of the figures warp out. One warps in a different way..)

????: Know this, X.....The time for games is over....The War is about to begin..

( The figure warps out)

X: What-.....

Zero: Let's go. We've got to report this to everyone.

X: Yeah...( What did he mean by...War?)

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????: Are you sure this is where he lives?

????:Yes. Let's go.

(The two figures knock no a door)

?????:Hang on....(Opens door) Yeah?

????: Are you Ichimu Seidan?

Ichimu: Yeah, that's me. What do you want?

????: We represent a certain group that would like to help you.

Ichimu: Help me?...In what....?

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????: James Hikyuu?

James: Yeah? Can I help you?

????: We talked on the phone.

James:....Oh. Yeah.

????: Have you made you decision?

James:...Yeah...I'll take your job.

????:Good. If you'll follow us, please...

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????: Are you Cameron Shakaku?

Cameron:Yeah...that's me.

????: We would like to offer you a special job.

Cameron: No thanks.

????: It would allow-

Cameron: I said I'm not interested.(Turns to leave)

????:-you to fight Mavericks.

Cameron:(Stops)...What did you say?

????: You would be able to fight Mavericks.

Cameron: O.k....When do I start?

????: If you will follow us...

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????: well, shall I introduce you to the people you will be working with?

Cameon: I don't care about them. Nor, do I want to know them.

????:...Very well. Then, I shall introduce you to your teacher and let you begin.

Cameron:......(Like I care).

????: Sir. This is Cameron.

?????: Cameron. Nice to meet you.

Cameron:....Whatever. Who are you? You look weird.

????: Uh..

?????: Don't worry. Yes, I may look weird to some. But, I ausure you, I will teach you how to fight.

Cameron: That so?

?????: Yes. You may call me, Ninetails.

Cameron: And what do I call you?

????: I am called Storm.

Cameron: Weird names.

Storm: Don't worry about it.

Ninetails: You will be here a while. Why not meet with some of the other students?

Cameron: I don't care to talk to them, thanks.

Ninetails: Very well. Then let's begin...

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Alia: Are you two sure?

Zero: Why would we make this stuff up? I don't know what's going on but, that guy slamed me into the ground like I was a feather. And I know he wasn't at full power.

Aila: This doesn't look good.

Nana: I just got through running a energy sweep of sector 9. Whoever you met isn't there anymore. What's weird though is there isn't any energy traces. It's like they wasn't even there!

Axl: What kind of power do they have!?

Alia: X? You've been really quiet.

X: Huh? Oh, It's nothing. Just a lot of stuff on my mind.(Leaves)

Zero: What's up with him?

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(door opens)

Tron: Huh? Oh! Josh! What's up?

X: Nothing...

Tron:...You sure?

X:..?

Tron: You seem...far away.

X:...I'm thinking of that guys last words..

Tron: What did he say?

X:..Something about a War about to begin.

*Flashback*

????: Know this, X.....The time for games is over.....The War is about to begin....

*end*

Tron:....Maybe it was just a threat?

X:....Maybe..

Tron: Yeah. Maybe that's all it was.

X: Thanks, Tron..

Tron:*Blushes* S-Sure. No problem. Um..I'd better get back to work...

X:..o.k. See ya!

Tron:...Bye.

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Eneson1:Hey did you here?

Eneson2: No. What?

Eneson1: Some high up guy is coming down here to supervise the rebuilding.

Eneson2: Really? Wow! I bet the big bosses are going crazy!! heheheh..

Eneson1: Yeah. I-

????: Are you two on shift?

Eneson1:Uh..uh..Y-yes Major! We'll get right on it!! (Both of them run like crazy)

Major:.....Enesons...

????: Something wrong, Major?

Major: No. Just some solders standing around, Colonel.

Colonel: I see. well get everyone to their posts. The L.Cmd. is on his way.

Major: Right. (Leaves)

Colonel:....Why did H.Q. send a General here.....?

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Eneson: We are now landing, sir.

????: Very, good.

????: Has the Colonel of this sector been notified?

Eneson: Yes, Cmd. Jet Blade.

Cmd. Jet Blade: Good.

????: You are dissmised.

Eneson: Yes, sir.

Cmd. Jet Blade: Will we tell the Colonel of the situation, L.Cmd.?

Gen:....If it becomes necessary.

Cmd. Jet Blade: Uh..Of course, sir.

Gen: I do not like everyone knowing of such matters as this.

Cmd. Jet Blade: Right....Uh..sir.

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????:........

?????: Something on your mind, Master?

????:.....I want to send, him.

?????: So soon?

????: Yes....I believe it is time to test how far X, and Zero has come over the years.....

?????: Of course, Master. As you wish.

????: Send him in.

( Door opens)

???: You sent for me, Master?

????: Yes. It is time for you to fight.

???: I shall do as you command.

????: Good. Target X, and Zero. But do not kill them.

???: As you wish.

????: Do not dissapoint me. I do not like failure.

???: Y-Yes, Master. ( Warps out)

?????: Master. We also have new men to fight as well.

????: We shall use them soon...

?????: Of course. I have also heard tell that the Federation has sent at least one of the Supereme Commander's men to this area.

????: Hmm? Well....Perhaps, we should welcome him? Send one of these men you have spoken of. Let's just see how good they are....

?????: As you wish.....

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???: Heheheheheh. Now, how does one get X, and Zero's attention?? Oh! I know! (Charges) Resounding Crusher!!

( A blast of energy impacts a nearby building and implodes the building)

???: Heheheheheh. I wonder how long it takes them to get here...? Oh well. I'll just destroy some more buildings until they do! Heheheheheheh!!! (Charges weapons)

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Alia: X! Zero! We've got trouble in Sector 2!!

X: On it!

Zero: Can you I.D. the Maverick?

Alia: That's just it. I can't read anything on my sensors! But eye-witness are saying someone near Grid 32 is the cause!

Zero: Thanks!(unsheaths Z-Saber) We'll find out what's going on!

Alia: Be careful!! If I can't read them, then I can't tell their attacks or anything...and..

X: It might be them.

Zero:..!!...We've got to find out what's going on!

X: Alia! Have the Team on standby. I'll signal if we need help.

Aila: Roger. By the way, X, you're Nova Armor is still offline, so you'll have to use your other armors in this battle.

X: Thanks! I'll keep that in mind.

( X and Zero race off to the area of battle)

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Believe it or not that's about half of the chapter. Heheheh!! Kinda long I know!



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Man, my eyes exploded from all that reading.... But I'm glad you're still writing!

Nice avatar by the way, never knew that Mega was all that beefy. biggrin

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LOL!!! Beefy??? Never heard Mega Man as beefy!!! Hahaha!! But thanks for the comment. I'm wondering wether I want this avatar or another one I'm going to put up. Anywhoo, I really have 7 Ch. already made up. all of them are about twice this long. Haha!! But, I'm wondering if I should just stop and open a link to my Xanga site instead, or keep writing. *Shrughs*

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Wow very nice story! I like it

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Thanks!!! Do you all think I should keep posting???

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Go ahead dude! But if you can, do you think pictures of any characters could be put up?

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Thanks!!! Um, I'll try to get my pics up soon. Maybe in a couple of days, but they probably won't be in color since it takes froever for me to color them. We'll see. ^_^ The second part of the 1 Ch. will be up soon, too!!!! And thanks for the support guys!!!!!

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yeah do it. smilenice story by the way.

-- Edited by otmane13 at 13:14, 2007-08-17

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O.k.!!! This is the second part of the 1st chapter. Hope you all like it!!!!

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???: Hmmmm...Where are they?? I'm growing impatient!! Huh?

(Down below)

X: I think he's up on that building!!

Zero: Yeah, he's up there. I can see his energy aura!

X: Let's go!

(X and Zero start to run up the building)

???: Well, well.( He jumps off the building toward X and Zero)

X: There he is!!

???: What took so long!? (Fires a energy shot)

X: (Dodges) Who are you!?

???: Hahahahahaha!!! ( Fires a volly of energy shots)

Zero: Don't waste your breath on these guys. They only understand one thing-( ready his Z-Saber)-THIS!!

( As Zero Throws a slash wave, X fires a buster shot that counters the energy shots.)

X:Zero! Now!!!

Zero: AAAAaaaaaaaa!!!!!!

( Zero and X slam into the unknown replioid in a huge explosion)

???: (Jumps back and charges) You will both fall before the power of, Merix!! Resounding Crusher!!

( As the smoke clears X and Zero dash toward Merix. Zero charges his Z-Saber and X unsheaths his U. Sword.)

Merix: Huh?! What the-

Zero: So you wanna fight,huh?

X: Well, we'll give you a fight!! X-Slash!!

Zero: Z-Slash!!

Merix: No! How-!?

( X and Zero slash Merix higher up in the air)

X: I don't know who you are- (Dissapears and reapears above Merix with his X-Buster charged and ready)-But you are gonna regret attacking us!!

Zero:Containment beam! See ya, buddy!

Merix: No! I won't-

X: X-Buster! Full Power!!( Fires X-Buster) HAAaaaaaaa!!!!

( Merix is sent down by X's attack, Zero flies up just outside of the attack and slashes Merix back up where X attack with his U.Sword. Merix slams into the top of a nearby building)

X: I think that took care of him!

Zero: Heh. Stupid, Maverick didn't see what hit him!

Merix: ah.......ah......ahah..ahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!

X: Huh!?!? What-

Zero: No way!!!

Merix: Hahahahahahahahaha!! Is that all the Legendary Warriors have!? Pitiful!!!

X: I-I can't believe it!!!

Zero: O.k. that's it! Let's go!

X: He's going down!!

Merix: Let me show you-(Charges)-how powerful I really am....

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Cameron: Ha! (Punches a wooden pillar) Unh! Arrrgghh! Why am I doing this!?!?

Ninetails: To learn how to fight.

Cameron: I aready know how to fight!

Ninetails: Really? Then show me.

Cameron: All right! take this!

(Cameron throws a punch that Ninetails blocks effortlessly)

Cameron: Huh? Aarrgghh!!

(Cameron then tries to roundkick Ninetails, but Ninetails grabs his foot and throws him into a nearby wall)

Ninetails: You lack balance, as well as power.

Cameron:....unh...

Nainetails: Now get back to work. You have much to learn.(Walks away)

Cameron:.......

James: Hey! Cam! Everyone is heading out for a break! Wanna come?

Cameron:........no....

James: Huh?

Cameron:..I have work....(Restarts his trainning)

James:...Man, talk about a workaholic...(Walks away)

Cameron:( I...have..to...become stronger...I... have to...)

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Alia: No!

Nana: What?

Alia: I just lost contact with X and Zero!

Nana: How?

Alia: I don't know.

Layer: I'm still picking up weapons fire.

Nana: Alia. Do they need help?

Alia:.....Um..I..

Layer: We need to make a dicision.

Alia:.....Call everyone.

Nana: Right.

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X: Unh!! (Dodges an attack)

Merix:Ahahahahahahaha!!! Merix Firewave!!

Zero: X! Look out!!

X: Arrggghhh!! X-Aura!!

Zero:That's it! I've had it!! Raijingeki!!!!

( Zero throws an electric slash at Merix who blocks it with his sword)

Merix: (Dodging Electricity) heh, Is that it, Zero?

X: You forgot this, Merix!! Echo Shot!!

Merix: Huh? Where is the attack? Unnhhh!!

(Just as the Echo Shot his Merix, Zero's attack slams into Merix as well)

Merix:...Rrrrrrggghhhh!! Merix's Inferno!!!

X:Uunnnnhhh!!!

Zero:Aaarrgghhh!!

(X and Zero hit the ground, full force)

X: That was like the-

Merix: Hahahaha!! Perhaps the War will come sooner than I thought!

Zero:Unh.. What are you babbleing about now?

Merix: You will know soon. Until then, I'll show you to respect me!

( Suddenly as Merix is about to attack, the X-Team warps down and readys their weapons.)

Merix:..Well, well. It looks like I have overstayed my welcome....

Axl: Let him have it!!! (Everyone fires)

Merix: Until next time, X..Zero.

(Just as the attacks were about to hit Merix he warps out.)

Axl: You two o.k.?

X: Fine.

Zero:....

Bass: We could not reach you over the com. It appears he has the ability to jam all signals in battle.

Tron: Josh. are you sure your o.k.?

X: Yeah I'm fine. Don't worry.

Cinnamon: We'll repair your armors when we get back.

Zero: Let's go.

Axl: Was he that hard?

Zero:....

X: Guys...We've got trouble...

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Cmd. Jet Blade: Colonel. May I introduce you to Gen.Dextron.

Colonel: Gen.Dextron, sir.

Gen.Dextron: Colonel.

Colonel: It is very rare to receive a visit from one of the Supereme Commander's men. May I ask why I am honored with such a visit?

Gen.Dextron: I have been sent to help with the reconstruction. The Supereme Commander is concerend with the vunerability to Den Tech.

Colonel:...Ah. As you wish. We have your quarters over here. If you will follow me.

????: Now, the Gen. doesn't need a rest does he?

Colonel: Who are you? Identify yourself, eneson!

????: Eneson? No, no..Your are mistaken. I am known as Ice Spearhead.

Cmd.Jet Blade: A Maverick!? (Activates Shear Blades)

Ice Spearhead: No. Not exactly.

Cmd. Jet Blade: What?

Ice Spearhead: Oh, don't get me wrong. I am here to destory you. heheheh. Welcome to the War, General!!!!

Gen. Dextron: You will regret this.

Ice Spearhead: I don't think I will!! Spear of Ice!!

Cmd.Jet Blade: No, you don't! Hiiieeaaaaaa!!!!!!!

(Cmd.Jet Blade slashes with his Shear Blades, but his attack is blocked by Ice Spearhead's Spear of Ice)

Colonel: Take this!! Colonel Cannon!!

Ice Spearhead: Ha!! Ice Wave!!

(Ice Spearhead counters the Colonel's attack)

Colonel: What is this-Unh!! What?! H-How did he attack me?

Gen.Dextron: I believe I will take over, now.

Ice Spearhead: Fine by me. Aarrgghh!! Ice Storm!!

Cmd.Jet Blade: General, look out!!

Gen.Dextron: Dextron Saber!!

(The General blocks Spearhead's attack)

Ice Spearhead: Huh?

Gen.Dextron: Too slow! Dextron Saber! Shotgun Mode!!

Ice Spearhead: What the-?!

(Gen.Dextron fires a blast that sends Spearhead into the plane, blowing it up!)

Colonel:....How did you do that!?

Gen.Dextron:....I shot him.

Cmd.Jet Blade: General! Look!!

Ice Spearhead: Unh!! I-I'm..not done yet!!( Ice Spearhead slowly walks out from the explosion)

Gen.Dextron: You want more!?

Ice Spearhead:Rrrrgghhhh!!! Winter's Storm!!

(Spearhead turns the entire area into a snowland)

Ice Spearhead: Heh! I won't go down that easily!

Gen.Dextron:....You have some power. I'll give you that, but you haven't seen the full extent of mine.

Ice Spearhead:Oh really?? I'll show you power!!

( A cloked figure warps down)

?????:Leave him.

Ice Spearhead: But, sir!!

?????: Now.

Ice Spearhead: I will destory you, General. (warps out)

Gen.Dextron: And you are?

?????: I have no need to answer you.

Gen.Dextron: Well, maybe this will make you talk! Shotgun Mode!!

(Gen.Dextron fires his shotgun)

?????:*Chuckles*

(????? blocks the attack with his hand)

Gen.Dextron: Huh?!?

?????:.....Will you fight in this War...?(Warps out)

Cmd.Jet Blade:Who were they?

Colonel: What was that last thing he said?

Gen.Dextron:....Let's go. I see I have my work cut out for me.

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Hawk:........Where is this guy?

????: I see you do not like to be kept waiting.

Hawk: No, I don't. I also don't like freaks sneaking up on me.

????:....Do you have it?

Hawk: Yeah. (Shows a disk) I have it. Don't know why anyone would want some battle data.

????: It is no concern of yours.

Hawk: Whatever.(Hands over disk) I'm outta here.

????: Not so fast.

Hawk: What?

????: Your job is not done yet.

Hawk: What!? I didn't sign up for anymore jobs!

????: This is for the payment you have aready received.

Hawk:(Pulls guns out) Don't mess with me, man!

????: Do you really think that will work this time?

Hawk:.......

????: After this you will be done.

Hawk:I better be. These guns might not work on you, but that doesn't mean I won't try!

????:.....(Throws a book)..This is your target.

Hawk: Who are they?

????: Some group of replioids that are like Mavericks.

Hawk: They aren't Mavericks?

????: No, but they have similar goals. Just spy on them.(Turns to leave) And don't get caught.(Warps out)

Hawk:.....I might need some help on this one......

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Head Dr.:.......Hmmmm.

Dr.: Well, sir?

Head Dr.:.....This is..interesting. Are you sure you can do this?

Dr: Yes, sir. I am.

Head Dr.:...Very well....Gather the men you need. I shall set a deadline soon.

Dr.: Yes, sir! Thank you, sir! I shall not fail you. (leaves)

Head Dr:....Hmmm...(Moniter beeps)...Yes?

????: How is it proceeding?

Head Dr.: Very good.

????: .......You may continue.I shall contact you in the near future.(Ends transmission)

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X: I can't believe that guy took everything we threw at him.

Zero: We didn't throw everything at him.

X: Maybe, but that guy wasn't useing all of his power either.

Alia: I'll analyze what I can and see If I find any weak points.

Nana: In the mean time you two get some rest. I'll have the others on rotating shifts.

X: Thanks.

Layer: I'll look after your armor.

X:*Nods* X Armor! Power down!

Zero: Zero Armor! Power Down!

Josh: I'm heading out.(Leaves the Command Room)

Alia: Were are you off to, Shokunin?

Shokunin:...Training.(Leaves)

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Josh:.....Hey, I goning to town. Anyone want to go?........Guess not. *Shrugs* Oh well.* Starts to leave*

Tron: Oh! Wait, Josh!

Josh: Huh?

Tron: I need to go to the city too. Um..I need some parts for an invention.

Josh:..Uh..well..o.k..if you want.

Tron: Well, then...Let's go..


(Over by some shrubs)

Axl:*Sniker* heheh. Josh and-

(Roll smacks him in the head)

Roll: Quiet!!

Axl: Ouch! That-

(She hits him again)

Axl: Would you *Quit* it!!!

Marino: Axl! Can it!

Axl:...Man I can't have any fun.

Marino: What are they talking about?

Roll: I think their going to the city!

Axl: I think I'm going back inside.

Marino: Oh no, your not! (Stops him) Your coming with us!!

Axl: ME!?!? Why, me!?

Marino: Because you can change your appearance!

Roll: Exactally! Your gonna help us spy!

Axl: Um...Don't you think this is a bit..umm..how should I put this...NUTS!!!!!

Marino: No!! Now come on!! (Drags him toward the city)

Axl: Why me!!!! *Sobs*

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Cinnamon: Where are they going, Alia?

Alia: Huh? Oh, them. It's better you not know.

Cinnamon: Huh? What do you mean?

Bass: You might not let ZX, know that Roll is gone either.

Alia:....How long is this going to keep going?

Bass: I have stoped tring to guess when. ( Bass and Alia leaves)

Cinnamon:....Huh?

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Josh: Well, Where do you want to go first?

Tron: I guess we should go get the parts for my invention, first.

Josh: ....Where do you go to get mechanical parts?

Tron: heheh. Don't you remember? The Striker Unit opened a shop!

Josh: Oh, yeah! Now I remember!

Tron: Let's go!

Josh: O.k.!


Marino: Where are they?

Roll: Hmmm. There they are!!

Marino: Where? Oh! Good! Now, Axl-...Where do you think your going!?!?

Axl: (Stops sneaking) Um..I..was..um..thirsty?

Marino: Get back here!

Axl: Awww....

Roll: Now change into something and follow them.

Axl: uh...I..can't.

Roll: Why not?

Axl: Um...My copy chip..is..with Alia..Yeah, and so I-

Marino: Yeah right! Axl!

Axl:.........o.k...o.k.!! But do I have to?

Both: Yes!!

Axl:*Sigh*

Roll: Now get out there!

Axl: Alright! C.Change! (Axl changes into a old replioid) I'm doing this under protest.

Marino: Whatever. Get going.

Axl:*Sigh* I'm never gonna spy again...


Tron: Josh! It's over there! Just pass that corner!

Josh: O.k..cool! Let's go!

(As Josh and Tron walk toward the shop Axl slowly advances toward them.)

Tron: Here it is. They should have what I need. I'll just run in and pick it up.

Josh: O.k. by me. I'm gonna go find a place to sit down.

Tron: O.k.! I'll find you when I'm done.

Axl: Huh? No way! There spiltting up!?

(Com)Marino: Axl! Waht are they doing!? They look llike they're spiltting up!!

Axl: They are!

(Com)Roll: This is no good! Maybe they got in a fight?

(Com)Marino: No, that can't be.

(As Marino and Roll argue over the com. People are looking at Axl like he's talking to himself.)

Axl: Um..Do you guys mind!! People are looking at me!

(Com)Roll: Huh? Oh no! Quick, Axl, get back here!

Axl: I give up......

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????: Merix. You will be silent.

Merix: But, Master! I want to destroy them!!

????: Not now.

Merix:...Yes, Master. (Leaves)

?????: He is ambitious, Master.

????: Yes..I will use him soon, but for now...I have a mission for you.

?????: Yes, Master?

????: I want you to destroy..Mega Man X.

?????: *Smiles* As you wish. (Warps out)

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Josh:....What's going on over there?......Hmmm...Nothing to worry about I guess.

Waiter: May I get you anything, sir?

Josh: Huh? Oh...uh..a coke, I guess.

Waiter: Anything, else?

Josh:....(Sees Tron coming out of the store)...Yeah, make that two cokes.

Waiter:O.k. It'll be here in a second.

Josh: Thanks.(Waiter leaves)

Tron: There you are.

Josh: Hey. Looked like a good place to rest.

Tron: Yeah, it does.

Josh: I ordered some drinks, too. I was kinda thirsty.

Tron: Me too. (sits down) heheheh.

Josh: What's so funny?

Tron: Nothing. It's just if Nana, or someone saw us they'd think we're on a date.

Marino: Date!! I heard her say "Date"!!

Roll: So they are on a date!!

Axl: Wait! Maybe she didn't- (The girls glare a him) o.k. o.k. just don't hurt me!

Marino: Shhhhh!! I'm trying to listen!!

Axl:....aw,man.

Josh: Um...well, I guess we'd better finish getting everything.

Tron:...O.k.

(Suddenly screams can be heard)

Josh: What's going on?

Tron: I have an "idea".

(They look as people run from explosions coming from a hooded figure)

Josh: Time to go to work.

Tron: Right.

Josh:..Um..

Tron: What?

Josh: Are you sure you can fight?

Tron: Huh? Of course I can. I'm not helpless, you know!

Josh: Right, sorry. O.k. Let's do this! X Armor!

Tron: Tetra Armor!

Both: Power Up!

(Light surrounds both Josh and Tron as they transform into Tetra and MegaManX)

X: Right, now let's see what's going on!

Tetra:*Nods*

(They both fly off toward the explosions)

Marino: Oh, great!

Axl: Whew!

Roll: Come on! Let's help them out!

Marino: Man, and things were just getting good! Let's go, Axl!

Axl: Right! (At least I won't have to use my copy abilitys anymore)

(Suddenly an energy blast fly into a building)

X: Where's the attack coming from?

Tetra:...Over there!!

X: It might be that Merix, again. Be careful. That guys alot stronger than he let's on.

Tetra: Right.

X: Look out!

(X and Tetra barely dodge an energy wave)

Tron: They don't seem to be directed toward us!

X: He's probably just trying to draw us out.

(Suddenly two figures warp down)

X: Zero! Bass!

Zero: What're you doing here so soon?

Tetra: We heard the explosions and rushed over.

Zero: Oh. Hey! Who's that?

X: Huh?

(Marino, Roll, and Axl rush over)

Axl:*Huff**Huff* Hi, guys!

Marino: What's up?

Bass: Where have you three been?

Roll:...Uh..

X: What do you mean?

Bass: They have been gone ever since you left.

X: They have, have they?

Marino: heheh..Well you see...We..

Roll:...We..Had to help Axl!!

Axl: What!?!?

Marino: (Elbos Axl) Yeah! You see...

X: Never mind. We'll talk about this later..Zero. Any ideas on who we're about to meet?

Zero: No. Alia got the same readings from before.

X: So this is Merix, or his hooded friends..

Axl: This'll be fun.

X: O.k., everyone. Let's move out!

(They all dash toward the unknown figure)

????: Well, so they finally show up do they? I nearly blew up the whole place out of boredom!

X: Who are you! Show yourself!!

????: Hahaha! All in good time.

Zero: Yeah? How about now!!!(Unsheaths Z-Saber and rushes the enemy)

????: (Dodges the attack and slams Zero back into a wall) Hahahahahaha!! Is that all??

Axl: Zero, you o.k.?

Zero: Fine. I'm gonna wipe that grin off your face, pal! You hear that?!?!

????: By all means...try!

( Zero rushes the enemy again but this time he dodges the enemys counter-attack and slashes him with the Z-Saber)

Zero: How's that?!

????: Hmm. I'm through playing. I have a mission to carry out!!(Grabs cloak) It is time to face-(Throws cloak in the air)-Serium!!!

(As the X-Team charges the enemy, Serium powers up for a battle that will set the stage for the beginning of the War...)



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Mind if I say this?aww

Gen. Dextron: Say hello to my BOOMSTICK!!!!

Gosh, that's such an old joke.

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